Winter Stars

Larry Levis

‘Winter Stars’ by Larry Levis tries to reconcile the estranged relationship between a son and their dying father.

Larry Levis

Nationality: American

Larry Levis was an award-winning American 20th century poet.

His award-winning poetry masterfully captures deep existential themes and emotions.

Key Poem Information

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Central Message: Reconciliation between loved ones

Speaker: A son speaking to their father

Emotions Evoked: Grief, Guilt, Regret

Poetic Form: Free Verse

Time Period: 20th Century

An emotionally charged poem that uses somber imagery and figurative language that imparts the importance of saying the unsaid before it's too late

‘Winter Stars’ is a poem that digs into the ways familial estrangement can only grow more complicated the longer it’s allowed to fester. With the help of a startling anecdote by the speaker that sees their father engage in violence to protect their grandfather, the poem tries to find some closure amidst the failing health of a parent. Levis unveils the speaker’s thoughts and memories through a stream of consciousness, giving the poem a fragmented atmosphere that highlights their attempts to wrestle with all the unresolved grievances and unspoken words they never spoke to their now-dying father.


‘Winter Stars’ by Larry Levis is a poem that explores the bittersweet relationship between a child and their dying father.

‘Winter Stars’ opens with an anecdote about the speaker’s father and grandfather, which revolves mainly around an attempt upon the latter’s life. This story highlights some of the poem’s central themes and motifs, including a sense of fierce guardianship for one’s parents and a lack of understanding (or openness) between a father and son. But the poem’s central theme is a regret expressed by the speaker over their enmity.

At first, the misunderstanding hones in on the speaker’s inability to rationalize their father’s cool and seemingly unfazed response to the incident itself. But eventually, it’s revealed by the speaker that the schism between the two is deep and remains unchanged over decades.

The speaker reflects in adulthood on being further unprepared to reconcile their fragmented relationship with the fact that their father is dying. They also realize they’ve misinterpreted the stars they used to stare up at as a kid — which once symbolized a soothing justification for the coldness between father and son. But now they understand they were mistaken, expressing regret at not “believing” more in the necessity of words between the two. This is especially a means to find some sort of reconciliation.

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Structure and Form

‘Winter Stars’ is composed of ten stanzas with no discernible rhyme scheme or meter. The stanza lengths vary greatly, with Levis using them to follow the stream-of-consciousness flow of the speaker’s somewhat fragmented memories and imaginations. The use of both enjambment and end-stopped lines contributes to that effect, with each stanza functioning as thoughts drifting through the speaker’s mind as he looks up at the stars.

Literary Devices

‘Winter Stars’ uses a variety of compelling images that are themselves rooted in the speaker’s mind as lucid memories. There’s the opening anecdote about their father when he “broke a man’s hand / Over the exhaust pipe of a John Deere tractor.” A graphic scene that’s followed by a hyper-focus on the assailant’s weapon, which was a “sharpened fruit knife” (“curved tip of it”), and even a simile that compares it to a “glinting beak.” The speaker also is quite detailed in describing the cold nights they spend outdoors looking up at the stars — staring “through the wet branches of an oak” at the “thin haze of them, shining / And persisting.”

The speaker also use metaphor when trying to describe the effects of memory loss on their father’s mind (“the mind as a place continually / Visited, a whole city”) and in realizing the importance of communication between loved ones (“believing in words the way a scientist / Believes in carbon, after death.”).

Symbolism is also incredibly important to the meaning of the poem, especially with regard to the stars that the speaker describes. They admit for a long time they believed that the words “unsaid” between father and son had just become “empty, / And pure, like starlight, & that it persisted.” But that symbolism proves false or, at the very least, unhelpful to the speaker, who is now struggling with their father’s impending death. There’s also some symbiotic symbolism between the image of the broken hand at the beginning of the poem with the wind that’s the “size of a wrist” in the eighth stanza. This makes sense since the cold weather and stars are what possibly jogged the speaker’s memory into thinking about the curious tale involving their father breaking another man’s hand.

Detailed Analysis

Stanza One

My father once broke a man’s hand
Over the exhaust pipe of a John Deere tractor. The man,
Lay alone in the dark, listening to music.
He never mentioned it.

The first stanza of ‘Winter Stars’ tells a short but shocking narrative: the speaker’s father once “broke a man’s hand” for trying to murder “his own father.” No details are given for the motive or really the aftermath of such a dramatic incident — the reason for which is best summed up by the stanza’s last line (“He never mentioned it”). As a result, the reader can infer this wasn’t a story given freely between father and child but rather more likely gleaned second-hand and pieced together on one’s own.

The details the speaker chooses to focus on are also telling, honing in on the moments of violence themselves (the “curved tip” of Rubén Vásquez’s “sharpened fruit knife” and the way it was “like a glinting beak” in his hand) and their equally disquieting aftermath (their father’s ability to eat lunch and listen to music like nothing out of the ordinary had happened). The anecdote and imagery help develop the theme of a strained relationship between father and son.

Stanza Two

I never understood how anyone could risk his life,

Stanza two summarizes the speaker’s feelings of confusion over the story. Specifically, they question how their father was able to so quickly compartmentalize such a moment of crisis (be it the fear of one’s father’s murder or an act of violence in self-defense). The ability to listen to music is particularly troubling to the speaker, who wonders how their father could even enjoy something so beautiful or pacifying — such as baroque composer Antonio Vivaldi — after risking his life. The speaker uses the incongruent moments of this story to highlight the many unspoken complications and misunderstandings that exist between the father and the speaker.

Stanza Three

In winter, & realize I am looking at the stars
Again. A thin haze of them, shining
And persisting.

Stanza three shifts the narrative from a retelling of their father’s memory to the present. The speaker describes entering their backyard in winter — to “stare through the wet branches of an oak” — only to find themselves (with a tone of surprise) staring at the stars “again.” This isn’t the first time they’ve engaged in such a routine, and their impression of the stars as “persisting” seems to imply the reason why: their quality of longevity and perseverance is admired by the speaker.

Stanza Four

It used to make me feel lighter, looking up at them.
In California, that light was closer.
You can almost believe that the elevator,
As it ascends, must open upon starlight.

Stanza four is the longest of ‘Winter Stars’ and, as such, provides the greatest context between the relationship between the speaker and their father in the present. They begin by describing the comfort given to them by the stars, which leads them to pine over a California that “no one will ever see again.” The same place where their father is “beginning to die.” It’s unclear what exactly is killing him, but the speaker’s descriptions of memory loss (“I watch my father / Search for a lost syllable” and “though he can’t remember, now, / the word for it, he is ashamed”) might imply some form of dementia.

The second half of the stanza uses an extended metaphor to describe the father’s mind as a physical location (“a place continually / Visited, a whole city”) that sits behind his “shining” eyes. The speaker imagines the “end” of that city arriving like the closing of a hotel (“the lights go off, one by one”), with all the “travelers” asleep inside. The final image of the hotel’s elevator rising towards the heavens — to “open upon starlight” — might allude to the speaker’s attempts to believe their father is going somewhere better after death.

Stanza Five

I stand out on the street, & do not go in.

Stanza five continues the extended metaphor of the city and hotel, revealing that the speaker (even in their imagination) does not enter into any intimacy with their father, which symbolizes the very tangible distance between father and child — a gulf that’s existed all the speaker’s life. “That was our agreement, at my birth,” they declare depressingly. Reaffirming the motif of silence between the two, which has only put increased strain on the speaker as they try to make sense of their father’s impending death.

Stanza Six

And for years I believed
That what went unsaid between us became empty,

In stanza six, the speaker wrestles with their long-held interpretation of their relationship with their father. Falsely believing that all the things that existed unspoken between them were made “pure, like starlight” and, because of that, “persisted.” This explains the speaker’s routine of staring at the stars, something they obviously did to comfort and instill this sentiment in their minds: a justification for the coldness between the two. The speaker hoped the stars symbolized the silent bond between them and their father — but it’s apparent that’s no longer the case.

Stanza Seven

I got it all wrong.

The speaker confesses their misinterpretation: using a cogent metaphor to underscore their blunder. Death and decomposition release the element of carbon (the physical basis of life), which is how scientists observe or believe in it — “after death.” In the same way, the speaker admits that only after their father’s mortal decline do they realize the importance of words over the guessed-at silence of the stars (or a parent).

Stanza Eight

Tonight, I’m talking to you, father, although
It is quiet here in the Midwest, where a small wind,

In stanza eight, the speaker directly addresses their dying father, also disclosing the important fact that they stand outside somewhere in the Midwest. This explains their earlier lament for California and also might imply there’s a physical distance between the speaker and their father still — though it’s not entirely clear from the poem. The description of the “small wind” as being the “size of a wrist” also seems to allude back to the opening story, in which the father “broke a man’s hand.” While the almost paradoxical image of the cold being awakened, as if to kindle something between them, recalls the hope the speaker imbues on the light of winter stars.

Stanza Nine

When I left home at seventeen, I left for good.

The single line between stanzas eight and ten is what fuels the interpretation that a large enough chasm still exists emotionally and maybe even physically between the father and speaker. The speaker’s decision to leave home at such a young age also exposes the long-ingrained strife between both, as well as the possibility that irreparable damage has already been done to their relationship.

Stanza Ten

That pale haze of stars goes on & on,
Like laughter that has found a final, silent shape

The last stanza ends with a tone of hope as the speaker clings to their interpretation of the stars going “on & on,” comparing it to laughter that’s been contained to a “silent shape / On a black sky.” In recognizing the failures of their relationship with their father, the speaker doesn’t sink into despair but rather moves towards something far more meaningful: reconciliation.

Once more, the paradoxical image of the “cold” appears, this time as the force that brings the two men together. In a lot of ways, the poem’s theme is best represented by the two middle lines of the stanza (“It means everything / It cannot say”). Although the speaker is obviously still pained by the things left unsaid between them and their father, or that they never did much to change that, it’s also clear the speaker isn’t so keen to let go of them. They might’ve made a mistake seeing the stars as symbols of the worth of the unspoken words, but now they see the stars in a different light, as representations of the ineffable bond between the two men. Similarly, just as the father is unable to recall literal words due to their declining health, so to the speaker understands that there’s no recovering those lost moments or time.


What is the theme of ‘Winter Stars?

The poem’s theme centers on the speaker’s regret over a severed relationship with their father. By the poem’s end, the speaker has revised their interpretation of the stars, realizing they mistakenly convinced themselves that silence between father and son was the best route for both.

What’s the purpose of the anecdote in stanza one of ‘Winter Stars?

From the opening anecdote to the symbolism of the winter stars, everything in the poem points to an unresolved estrangement between the two big and small. The story the speaker tells in the first stanza is emblematic of their distance (as the father never spoke about it) and lack of understanding (the speaker admits not being able to grasp their father’s ability to compartmentalize).

What’s the meaning behind the extended metaphor in ‘Winter Stars?

A little less than halfway through the poem, the speaker uses the extended metaphor of a city to represent the ways their father’s mind is failing them. A process of aging that has prevented — whether they like it or not — any verbal reconciliation between the two. In portraying his father’s mind as a city, he lends it a vast grandeur, while the comparison to a sleepy hotel can be seen as their attempt to envision a tranquil death.

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Winter Stars

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Larry Levis

This poem from Larry Levis is exemplary of his use of images and surrealist figurative language. Focusing on two distinct memories (the story of their father and the winter stars) he shapes an impactful commentary on the bittersweetness of family.
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20th Century

Levis' poem is memorable because of its touchingly poignant treatment of a universal conundrum: the relationship between a child and parent.
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The most affecting aspect of Levis poem is the universal quality of its themes, which deal with the tumultuous nature of child and parent relationships. As an American poem goes, it is not one of the most influential, though.
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The speaker is spurred to reconcile their relationship with their father because of their aging. But they're also prevented from doing so because of it as well since memory loss has severely impaired their father's ability to communicate. In a lot of ways the poem is as much about finding closure as it is about dealing with the inevitable aging of a parent.
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Coming of Age

The speaker of the poem confesses near the end of the poem they misinterpreted the winter stars they used to justify their estrangement from their father. Highlighting the ways children rationalize their treatment by parents and then internalize to replicate it. The speaker also reveals they left home at a young age and never went back, a sign of the lasting enmity between father and son. But as they've grown older (and especially now at the end of their father's life) they understand how much was wasted in never trying to reconnect and forgive.
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The poem is the speaker's attempt to speak one last time to ther father. An expression of both their inability to understand one another and regret over their lack of communication over the decades. In the end, the speaker realizes their relationship might've been different had they talked more.
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Although the speaker's father appears to still be alive in the poem, it's clear they are feeling no small amount of grief over their decline. The cruel irony of their inability to coherently speak due to their aging mind is particularly sorrowful.
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The reader might discern some guilt in the speaker's tone, at least in their expression of regret at not voicing these words earlier to their father.
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The speaker expresses intense regret at not taking the time to reconcile with their father when they had the chance. A sentiment that's emphasized through their symbolism of the winter stars and their metaphor about scientists and carbon.
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One of the poem's motifs is the severance and inability of its characters to communicate. It's this breakdown that leads to the estrangement between father and son, which is what the speaker hopes to repair (at least for themselves) in finally giving voice to their words.
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Death of a Father

The poem hones in on a father's impending death, giving an emotional recollection via the son's memories of their distant relationship. But it also wrestles with the way such a proximity to mortality (especially that of a parent) has of reconfiguring our thoughts and personal narratives.
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Fathers and Sons

Levis' poem is a beautifully melancholic portrayal of a father and son relationship that is perhaps all too familiar to many people.
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The mind is another motif in the poem, one represented by the speaker's retelling of a story related to them and their own memories of their father. Levis' use of an extended metaphor to describe the father's mind as a city and hotel (one the speaker describes being barred from) further develop the importance of the mind in the poem.
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Stars serve as a powerful symbol in this poem, representing both the beauty and transience of life. The speaker contemplates his father's mortality and the weight of their unspoken words, likening them to the stars shining above him. The stars, like their relationship, are both distant and enduring, a reminder of the fleeting nature of existence. The beauty and mystery of the stars offer a way for the speaker to come to terms with his father's impending death and to find a sense of reconciliation in the face of the unknown.
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Free Verse

Levis poem is written in free verse, allowing the poem's imagist descriptions of memories and the imagination to take on a prose-like structure.
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Levis poem best resembles an elegy, one that ruminates woefully on a dying parent and a regret over their shattered relationship. But it also ends with some small amount of hope as the speaker finds some closure in at least being able to admit all this to themselves.
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Steven Ward is a passionate writer, having studied for a Bachelor of Arts in English Literature and being a poetry editor for the 'West Wind' publication. He brings this experience to his poetry analysis on Poem Analysis.

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